Tuesday, 18 June 2013

Enigma



You are an enigma
I can’t wait to touch u;
Life within me

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Deep blue eyes;
I jump in the riddle
Only to drown

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She is unknown
He extends his hands;
Enigma solved

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Enigma of rain
I stand with my arms open;
My soul is drenched 




Written for Haiku heights. Prompt: Enigma


Image courtsey:p-sami.deviantart.com

36 comments:

  1. Beautiful set of haiku. Loved the imaginary.

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  2. I really like the idea of jumping into riddles!

    Orange Enigma

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  3. I loved the idea in the last one of being drenched in the enigma of rain! Lovely images! :)Mystery

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  4. The last one is especially beautiful!

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  5. Liked this Haiku because of the word Enigma...I have very good memory with this word..
    Nice Read

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  6. all praises !! I am stunned !! amazing !! Sfurti this is the best I have read so far,this week !!

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    1. Wow Mysay!! Thanks, such a big compliment!! Thanks again :))

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  7. Loved the first and last ones. lovely.

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  8. A lovely set. I especially like the last one.

    Notes on a Serviette

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  9. Hello Sfurti. Excellent Haiku. I loved the third one. Enigma solved!! Nice!!

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  10. brilliant set of Haiku.. loved it.

    A Rat's Nibble

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  11. Oh! What an imagery. I dare say, here Haiku is not attempted, it's far excellent . Keep writing Sfurti

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    1. Thanks so much Easwar. I am still learning but I must confess I am in love with this form!

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  12. Nice set of haikus.
    I liked enigma of rain!

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  13. I enjoyed them all. I especailly like the first one. It captured for me the mystery of pregnancy. "Life within me".

    Link to my HH:
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/06/20/gives-to-save-the-whales/

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  14. Oh my I totally fell in love with the second Haiku... So well penned... am amazed ((www.blogatcynthia.blogspot.in)

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