Thursday, 27 June 2013

Tearful Goodbye (Haiku)



© Peggy Goetz

abandoned gaze
a shattered dream
tearful goodbye



Written for Peggy's hosting at Real Toad's with prompt - About Face

14 comments:

  1. I have been going through your haikus. They are wonderful

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    1. Thank you so much Vanderloost :)

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  2. I can so see and sense the emotions on display!
    Well done...
    Writing it is a different story
    you captured the look

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  3. Beautiful response to the prompt...so full of emotion

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  4. This is wonderful. I didn't see the sadness in this young face until I read your haiku, and now I can't help but see the sadness.
    K

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    1. Aww Thanks Kay and for some reason the eyes looked really sad to me!

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