Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Tomatoes




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Shama was walking fast. It was already dark and she still had a lot of work to finish. If only she had not forgotten to get tomatoes in the morning, she would have been done with dinner by now. She wiped the sweat off her forehead and a smile lit her face, as she thought of her two little bundles of joy at home. Her younger one had made a tomato train in the morning and she had ended up spoiling all of them.

Shama still couldn't believe they were already 6 and 9 years old. It seemed only yesterday Saurabh and she had gotten married. She was a Muslim and Sauarbh was a Hindu Brahmin. Both of them were ousted by their families but they had not cared. They had settled in this new city and before they knew it, they were a family of four. Life had been like a dream for her till that dreadful day; the day Saurabh left them forever. She shivered as she thought of his last day. How he had hugged them before leaving and how his last words were “I won’t take too long”. He took long; he never came back and since then life had been really difficult for her.

Somehow in last 4 years she had managed to get a job inspite of her lack of any professional education. Slowly but gradually their life was getting back on the track. They didn’t have everything but they had enough to survive; above all they had each other.


Lost in these thoughts Shama was waiting for the traffic light to turn red. As soon as the light turned red, she started to cross the road. The windows of her home were visible. She hurried looking at them. Her girls would be waiting for her she thought. Lost in these thoughts she didn’t notice the speeding truck. Shama was flung high in the air. Her clothes went hay wire and she could feel the strength of the moving beast over her; she could feel the mush of her skin and bones; her bones crushed into her heart; she could feel her heart breaking into million pieces literally, as she thought of her daughters and then just like that she felt nothing. The dark took over. She laid there still holding the vegetable bag in her hand. The red of tomato was blending with the red of her.



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21 comments:

  1. Oh my gosh! You're back with a bang! Such a captivating, enthralling tale you've written. I could feel her every fibre of pain. Tragic end but brilliantly written.

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    1. Shailaja it was a really difficult prompt,got my cells working :D. Thank you so much!

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  2. Tragic story, Sfoo. But nicely done. Welcome back

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  3. That was bloodcurdling. Very well narrated though the ending almost made my heart stop. What will happen to the kids? See I came back to comment from my desktop. :)

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    1. Rachna this broke my heart too. I am glad it moved you. The story teller in me is very happy :D. Thank you!

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  4. Oh dear! Such tragedy! Her poor children! Otherwise, brilliantly written! ;) <3

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  5. * brrrrr *

    feeling sad for those poor girls at home. sad story, but nicely written, Sfoo!

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    1. Leo if it leaves you sad, my job is done. Thank you :)

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    1. Indeed sad Sunaina. Thank you for reading it :)

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  7. So dark and sad but life is like this. So much creativity!

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  8. Very well-written. I could feel Shama's pain. Lovely creativity!

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  9. How agonizing, especially her end when her last thoughts were for her girls!

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    1. It is Rosh! Thanks for reading it.

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  10. ohh dear!!! the ending is so heart breaking :( touching story.

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  11. That was so heart wrenching! A wonderfully narrated story!

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